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aah very nice
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Episode 6: Deal with The Devil

"When someone game me a choice of a lifetime, should i choose one or choose none..."

(Awaken from a harsh realization, Shin was greeted by the morning sun and a mysterious man)

???: Relax, Shin... take it easy, im not here to drive you nuts like the other one.

Shin: then what?

???: Im here to make a deal.

Shin: what kind of deal?

???: Hey! Hey! not so fast. I haven't introduce myself yet... Im pretty sure you know im one of those people. The most easy going guy of the group! i am the great "Fool"! ...........that ain't right...

Shin: i woudlnt be surprised if that is your title.

Fool: hey! hey! its not my fault i get this damn title! ...but


(mood suddenly darkened)

Fool: its advisable not to underestimate me. Don't forget that im one of the Arcana... I can break you like a twig if i want to...

(The fools words struck fear to Shin)

Fool: Soooo.... enough with the seriousness! before i tell you about the deal, my fellow arcana told me to give you a little introduction to Soul Control 101!!! hehehehe!

Shin:....


(Shin knows he is not one to be triffled with.)

Fool: So, what will it be? do you accept me or you can just figure it out all by yourself.

(Shin thinks carefully, "The sooner I can learn how to use my powers, the soone i can have my revenge against all of them" is what Shin is thinking "But, this guy will be watching my every move, i must be careful not to reveal my plans")

Shin: Fine! teach me everything! teach me how to control The Devil!

Fool: Good! ill see comeback tonight! and...
...Don't think i didn't know what your planning
(whisper to shin's ear)
Hahahaha!! Bye-bye, Shin! or should i say Devil-sama hehehe!!!

Shin: uh!....

Fool: oh! ill tell you about the deal later, im sure you'll agree to my offer. ha! ha! ha!...


(The Fool suddenly disappears)

Shin: that guy... ARGH!!! hes toying with me!.... someday, ill definitely gonna kill you all!, for all have you done to my friends... my family.

(that afternoon...)

KNOCK! KNOCK!

(a familliar man enters)

Hayato: sorry for the intrusion, mr. Mikifune (remember, it's Shin's last name)

Shin: ah, Mr. Detective! are you here about the School murders right?

Hatayo: uh... yes, about that, if your fine with just a couple of questions that would be fine.


Shin: It's fine you can ask me everything.

Hayato: very well then...


(hours later, the interview ended)

Hayato: thank you for your cooperation, well contact you if we found a lead.

Shin, no, its alright and good luck... detective...


(outside the hospital, a car was waiting for Hayato)

???: so ho'w the kid?

Hayato: well, his fine but theres something different about him...

???: huh? can't be helped. a guy will change if he knew that his friends dies, and can't even remember it... its better that he didnt remember the incident.

Hayato: I dont know... his expression keeps bugging me, i dont like it...

???: sigh... forget about everything, and lets go drinking tonight!

Hayato: get serious, Hiroki! the chief will be furious if you didn't report today!

Hiroki: uh!... your no fun!


(later that night...)

Fool: helloooo!!! oh! your already dressed-up! pretty excited, eh?

Shin: quit your jokes, were wasting time.

Fool: alright, alright. geez!... step back a little.

( he sticks his finger in the air, and makes a hole, then the hole gets bigger and bigger... a hole was big enough to enter.)

Fool: hehehe cool right? since you cant remember how to warp yourself, ive made a simple portal.

Shin: let's go...

Fool: your one boring kid, ya know that?

(the two enters the portal into...)

Shin: where are we?

Fool: welcome to my secret hideout!!!!!

Shin:........ but this just an abandoned warehouse.

Fool: tsk tsk tsk, this is no ordinary dump, ive made this place invicible to other Arcana... so no one can disturb us here.

Shin: why would be keep this a secret to the others?

Fool: because i LIED. they didnt tell me to teach you, actually they told me to leave you alone hehehehe.

Shin: then tell me, what you really want!

Fool: this is where my deal takes place...

Shin: the d-deal...


"If the Devil made you a deal... its either you won or you lose... there is no backing out"

Episode 6: Deal with The Devil ends...

Next: Episode 7: The Fool's Proposition

sorry it took so long, my internet sucks... every night my nets, gets disconnected every minute, but never in the middle of the day.its the 2nd time now, so if it hit 3, im going to complain!
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9th January 2011 16:30 #18
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wow! luve the way u wrote ur story, it realy put me into it!
its so good. cant wait till the next part!
never judge a book by it's cover!' - never get bored of this quote!
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wow! luve the way u wrote ur story, it realy put me into it!
its so good. cant wait till the next part!
never judge a book by it's cover!' - never get bored of this quote!
u can call me Mana!


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wow! luve the way u wrote ur story, it really put me into it!
its so good. cant wait till the next part!
never judge a book by it's cover!' - never get bored of this quote!
u can call me Mana!


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wow! luve the way u wrote ur story, it really put me into it!
its so good. cant wait till the next part!
never judge a book by it's cover!' - never get bored of this quote!
u can call me Mana!


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wow! luve the way u wrote ur story, it really put me into it!
its so good. cant wait till the next part!
Last edited: 9th January 2011 16:48 by mangaLuVeR

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sorry, my computer went completely mental! now there's lots of replays with the same message - my bad!

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Last edited: 9th January 2011 17:00 by mangaLuVeR

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haha
that just show how much you like the story
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Quote
Originally posted by MrAcid
haha
that just show how much you like the story


LOL! too right there!
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Episode 7: The Fool's Proposition

"The Fool... He represents the mystical cleverness bereft of reason within us..."

Shin: The... D-deal?... tell me.

Fool: hehehe... i want you to join me to destroy Fate!

Shin:! ...what...? but your an Arcana, Why? what's your reason...

Fool: you should already know... me and you, the arcana are created by Fate... that is why i must destroy it... to stop the creation of abominations like us.

Shin: abominations... yes... it would likely be the case, but i have my own reasons-

Fool:Revenge! heheheh am i right? Fate created you as a monster, they killed your parents, your friends... The others have their own reasons too.

Shin: Others?

Fool: are you taking me for a fool? kid. How would be destroy Fate with just the two of us. We have lots of members ya know! Staff members, High-ranking Officials and a couple Arcanas like us!

Shin: But is it possible to destroy such Facility? im sure there will be Armies protecting the place!

Fool: huh? what are you talking about, kid? were just targeting Fate.

Shin: Isn't "Fate" the facility...

Fool: tsk! tsk! tsk!, wrong! its just a facade. the "real" Fate is much more than that. Fate is inside the facility... the place where Fate is guarded is off-limits to all personnel, including Arcanas. only chosen few can enter that area, including the Higher-ups.

Shin: so... if we can infiltrate that area ...we can destroy Fate!

Fool: exactly! finally used that brain of yours!... so are you in?

Shin: Count me in!!!

Fool: hehehe... good choice, kid! but... before we can do the plan, i'll teach ya to control your soul and all the tricks i know!

Shin: you will!

Fool: of course! i didn't say teaching you was a lie. but first lets have a quick intro about what where dealing with.


*Soul (Arcana's soul) - these are not actual souls, but divine entity from a different dimension, we don't know where is that, but im sure there cranky when Fate yank them over here! that is why the go berserk when we awaken it. and Awaken is not really to wake up a sleeping Soul, its called summoning to be exact.

*Arcana - us arcana are special being created to be the master of the Soul and also be the vessel. Have you heard about the term "Cloning" right?. the one known to the public are just animal clones but Human cloning was already successful long time ago.

*Fate (facility) - its a HUGE! facilty where the create the Arcanas, its also an advance Research and Development Facility, most of the machines and techs the world are using was created here..., its really a miracle they kept that place a secret. as for the location, its in the middle of the "Pacific Ocean". its not located in the map, not even in the GPS. plus that area is off-limits to both sea and air. a handful of people knew of it's existence, BUT not anyone can go there. We Arcanas can come and go using Warp, but normal people has only one passage. and that is the underwater tunnel, ill explain the detail some other time

*(true) Fate - our primary target. we don't know what really is, all we know that it powers up the facilities, and the only connection to the the other world, where Souls came from.

*Soul Fusion - simple, where you and your Soul will fuse with you and powers you up. using a soul is not free of course! each type you use it, your energy will drain and put strain in your head.

there are 3 types of Fusion:
> Partial - it powers you up, but to an extent. can be used in longer duration
> Perfect - it gives you the most power-up you can get, it changes your appearance and acquire abilities, like flying, combustion and such.
> Over-Fusion - but this is the one you must be careful, when the Soul takes over your body and mind... your done for! you will be devoured by the soul and will retain the soul's original size and form.

Fool: this should be enough information for today!

Shin: heh.... pretty interesting. too bad, those will be gone when were done with it!

Fool: ya got that right! hahahaha! so shall we start the training, then!
first things first, lets starp-up you Soul.

Shin: How?

Fool: Easy! just think! imagine The Devil.... imagine it taking form and it will flows naturally


(Shin concentrates on The Devil forming... then suddenly happens around shin, it all went black...)

Shin: huh? what is this place? am i still in the warehouse... !

(The Devil appears before him, the same form he saw in the memories... staring at Shin. Shin Stares back.)

Shin: ...I've once feared you! but not anymore! Lend me your Power!!!!

(The Devil slowly disappears into the darkness... then a light opens up and)

Fool: YESSS!!! Yahoooo!!! wow! your pretty amazing Kid. A Perfect Fusion off the bat!

(Shin successfully made a perfect fusion, the same form in his memories, the black claws, black wings, covered in shadow.)

"The childlike ability to tune into the inner workings of the world... unless such child is Twisted, Reason matters not."

Episode 7: The Fool's Proposition ends

next: Episode 8: Black Wings

thank you for reading. im starting on a sketch on the 3 Arcana (the moon, the chariot, and the fool, in their normal form) so watch out for the updates on "My SKETCHES..." on the Digital Graphics section!
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nice! keep going.
and hurry cuz i want to know what happens next! (only kiddin )
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Episode 8: Black Wings

"Wings often symbolizes freedom... divinity... but why is mine bring chaos... and tragedy..."

Shin: but... how...

Fool: easy right? but your pretty amazing, you did Perfect-fusion in your first for the long time!

Shin: I feel somewhat stronger.

Fool: nice, isnt it? as a bonus you got wings! try flapping it, since this is your first flight, i would recommend to start slo-WOAH!

(Shin quickly flies)

Shin: I can Fly!!!!

Fool: of course ya are, those wings are not for decorations. and besides not all of us has wings like you. we can only go places with warp. Arcanas have different skills and abilities like you can fly using your wings, which means your accustomed to high-altitude. some can alter gravity and some uses the elements, light, fire, water etc.

Shin: so, i can also use the shadow, since i remember doing that in my memories.

Fool: wrong! its far more greater than that, the source of everything that is black, the shadows, the night, the absence of light... yours is the power of DARKNESS!

Shin: heh...... i guess my Arcana is pretty amazing.

Fool: Stop spouting non-sense and that yer wings for a spin, oh! dont go outside, or they will detect you.

(then Shin flies swiftly, around the inside of the warehouse)


Shin: WOOO! HOOO! this power... it feels good ...really good... UH!


(Shin suddenly felt a sudden fatigue)

Fool: hey! hey! kid! take it easy... relax and concentrate, try to control you power, your using it too much...

Shin:...uh! i-i can't.... it hurts ... my head hurts!


(suddenly Shin's devil form dissolves, falls into the ground and leaves Shin exhausted )

Fool: you okay kid?

Shin:
(panting) w-what just happen?

Fool: hmmm... its understandable, its been years you controlled your soul... well, consciously that is.hehehe!


(cough!) ahem... lets go with partial first. its the same method, just relax and dont think too mush of it... uh... how should i explain it.
the levels of Soul fusion depends on your mental status. the more you concentrate, the higher the fusion level.

and thanks to your cooperation in the experiment, we know knew that Emotion can also effect the levels.

Shin: shut up! dont ever mention anything about that damn experiment!

Fool: alright! alright! just get on with it!


(Shin concentrates again... with a more relaxed expression)

Fool: (whistle) not bad kid, your a natural at this.

(A Black Aura appears around Shin)

Fool: so how is it?

Shin: well... not bad, i guess.

Fool: just don't forget that feeling kid, cause will be training tomorrow night. next lesson is all about your other abilities.

Shin: but, ill be discharged tomorrow, we have all day to train-

Fool: STUPID!!! Fate will be on your tail all day. so just go refuse the offer and go on with your daily life.

Shin: fine...

Fool: okay, get in and just act normal.


(Shin returned to his room through The Fool's portal)

???: so, how was he? can he do the "Job"?

Fool: He will do fine! hehehehe just fine! hahahahaha!


"My Wings are the wings of the Devil, Darkness reigns as I take flight"

Episode 8: Black Wings ends

Next: Episode 9: Unwelcome

sorry it took so long, im kinda busy with my job, and im pretty spent when i get hope, so no time to write. but no worries, i will write this till the end.

I also have other long stories, but im thinking of doing it after Souls of FATE ends.
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Episode 9: Unwelcome

"Humans are simple-minded creatures, with the right words they will believed anything..."

(Shin was finally released from the hospital, on the entrance, a woman was waiting for him)

???: Hi , Shin...

Shin: hello, Reiko-san.


(Aunt Reiko took custody of me, after my parents died, even though she is their real daughter, she still treat me like a real brother.She visited me in the hospital time to time, but i was ignoring all the time...)

Reiko: I know your still in pain because of your friend's deaths, but if something you want just tell me.

Shin:... it's fine, i'm alright, let's just go home, ok?

Reiko:... ok.


(I felt sorry for Reiko, the time i'm with Reiko's parents, she was away because of her work, she returned because of the grave news... She lost her parents and left with me... and now im causing her more trouble... But-)

Shin: Im sorry Reiko-san for what happened...

Reiko: No, its not your fault, im just glad your safe now.


(Im sorry But soon, ill be leaving you behind.)

(The next day, i'll have to return to school)

Shin: Thanks for the meal.

Reiko: have a safe trip Shin.


(As i walked through the neighborhood, i can feel eyes watching over me. Is it Fate? the police? i was not sure. I can hear whispers around me as i passed by some of my neighbors.)

Shin: just in time...

(I felt the same gaze around me as i entered the school gate... A teacher was waiting for me)

Teacher: Ah! Mr. Mikifune, your classroom has been changed due to the incident, please proceed to class 3-E, the schedules are also changed, please refer to your classmates.

(I have a bad feeling about this...)

Class teacher: welcome, mr. Mikifune, please find a seat and we'll start the class

Shin: yes, ma'am

(The eyes, the whisper, its all the same even in here... Why?...)

(it was breaktime, i tried talking to my other friends, to find out what is all this about, but they all turned away, i asked the teacher, but she said nothing and tried to changed the subject.)

(I had enough, I quickly find a quite and secluded place, away from the crowd, but the silence was broken when-)

???: So, your Shin. I thought you were tough-looking since you did all that.

Shin:...Who are you? and what do you want?

???: Me, is not important, but the one we want is you... your pretty famous around this area, and since we're also famous, we don't like people to be more afraid to you than us.

Shin: huh! just a bunch of delinquents, i have nothing to do with the likes of you!


(Shin was suddenly punched in the stomach.)

???: tsk tsk tsk, how disrespectful, rumors flying around that the murderer is you. your the one who killed them...

(I guess I was right, i have my doubts but now its all clear... they have no evidence yet they believe to such rumors.)

Shin: hehehehe......

???: hmmm? whats so funny?


(Its funny that they didnt know that the rumor is 100% true... but i doesn't matter anymore, because im not the same anymore... i have the power to change their fates.)

Shin: Do you know what Karma is?

(Shin eyes glared back, with a reddish glow and a wicked smile)

"Stories, Theories or even Rumors. They can't say which is lies or the Truth, yet they still believed"

Episode 9: Unwelcome ends...

Next: Episode 10: Controlled Karma

-it took so long! but i will still continue and im sorry for the long wait, and im already working on the Sketch request.

-its hard to get my inspiration back, not in the mood maybe, but somehow im back again.

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