story time?
18th October 2011 13:34 #106
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We can build on the ideas we were working on before plus the previous ones.
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19th October 2011 13:59 #107
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So we are still making that story?
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19th October 2011 14:07 #108
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Yes we could make two stories but we have to make a new topic on mangable for that.
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21st October 2011 16:55 #109
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Yeah I dont know Final Fantasy very well so I'll leave that to somebody else. You sound exited on the page so I hope it works out really well :)

So with the story on this page, what are the main components we have discussed that you will be using? Just to get us back on track after this little break in the discussions...
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21st October 2011 17:10 #110
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Ok we should continue. (It was a good idea while it lasted).
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21st October 2011 18:12 #111
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Coming back to the conflict, instead of having a big explosion right at the beginning, maybe the complication could come up within the meeting (eg. an issue in one of the countries that they are not sure about but sounds suspicious to some of the other leaders because they have seen similar things, and then when they investigate further, they discover there is somebody trying to organise an assassination etc..)

Also the meeting at the beginning would be a really good point to introduce the countries etc. and get a bit of an introduction to the routine of how this world works (with the meetings and all the different cultures and stuff). Obviously not every detail would be given on the culture of each country but the basis could be explained enough so that the reader understands why the leaders do certain things in the beginning of the story.
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21st October 2011 19:24 #112
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Make sure every detail is up to par and all ideas are at their peak.
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21st October 2011 19:56 #113
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Actually for the beginning i was thinking of starting with small stories, where every story story presents one of the main characters and will have small, subtle, hints about the meeting and the main idea of the story, and the link between the small stories and characters will be made through secondary characters which will be involved with more than one country.
22nd October 2011 14:00 #114
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So have like a couple of little introductory stories to get the characters in context and the main storyline going and leading into the complication, whatever that will be. Is that what you mean? It takes me a little while to get some things...
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22nd October 2011 15:37 #115
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I made the explanation in a more telling way.


Oh so you want to know more about the countries. Well OK let me explain.
You know this land is split up in different countries right? yeah i thought you already knew about that. So where shall we start.

The Countries:
- Martial art
Well let's start with the martial art country.
The martial arts country is split up in smaller clans. This happened not because they had different views on the world but because the same martial art users started living together so they could make their own art stronger.
You might think the martial art users will fight each other because they think their own art is better, but you are wrong if you think that. The martial art users are peaceful people because they only believe that fighting should be done when there is no other way. They have a saying: ''The strong man fights but the strongest will walk away''. They say that a lot but don't get on their bad side because they can pack a punch.
The martial art users try to achieve harmony between their body, spirit and mind and they rather use their skill to improve society than to fight.
When a martial art users child turns 3 they will start there training and most of them are only a master of that art when they turn 30, that's why the martial art representative is not to be overlooked so easy because the martial art representative is a master of all the martial arts. The martial art representative of this generation was one of the greatest of all, He became a representative at the age of 25 and did some great things but I am changing the subject. I was talking about all the different countries.

- Tech
The second country where I am going to talk about is the technical country.
Well the technical country is more like a giant city. They made a place where the living conditions were meant to be great but because they use oil for almost anything there is a lot of air pollution, but I heard they fixed that problem.
The techs are smart people, well I don’t know if you can call them people anymore but they exceed in the use of electronics and mechanics. The Techs used their knowledge and put that to use on themselves making them more like cyborg. They may have the brains of a robot but they still have the heart of a human. Some of the Tech still look a lot like humans but some of them look more like giant robots but I have never heard that a Tech would hurt another living being. They also make robots to help them with all kinds of different tasks, those robots are an amazing sight. Well the whole city is an amazing sight but lookout because every city has its ghetto.
The leader of the Tech is always the smartest of the whole Tech country, the leader right now is a small boy of the age of 7. I don’t know if he is really 7 years old because the Tech don’t age, they only rust. But that kid is one of the greatest minds in the whole history.

- Alchemists
The third country are the alchemists.
Some of the alchemists decided to go live in the giant city of the Tech but most of them live in their own cities. I heard that the alchemy cities are amazing to see, nothing is what it seems because they use things for different purposes. They always say ''think outside the box’’. The alchemist are really curios and they are the inventive type. The alchemists try to find solutions for every problem, they sometimes even create small problems just so they can fix it.
Because of their curiosity they also want to take on nature itself. They want to know if people can go around the laws of nature. I heard that alchemists can make any kind of material from something else, I don’t know how they do it but i think they rearrange the material on a very small scale.
The leader of the alchemists is a woman around 40 years old. Normally a leader gets chosen by the people but she already got elected by the old leader because of her ground breaking discovery. The old leader was the leader for another 8 years and after that the alchemists accepted her as their new leader when she was 35 years old.
I forgot what the ground breaking discovery was. It was a hot topic in that time but it happened 13 years ago.

- Religion
The fourth is the religion country. It’s a country full of religious fanatics which worship ultimate beings (gods) that do not live in this world. A priests explained to me why they worship, he said: ‘’when people worship they open a gate to let the ultimate being’s energy flow inside their body’’. He also said that it would take years of dedication to open the gate in your mind. When the worshippers mind has open he receives a part of the god powers.
The country looks stable but looks can be deceiving. Almost all people in that country are believers of a god and they all think their own god is the best. So a lot of argument are started because of that. The people will fight each other to show their god is supreme. These fights have become wars and with these wars crusades where started. In these crusades they tried to exterminate all heresy, so they converted or killed the other religions. Because of the crusades the people who were thought as heretics became more eager to fight. The biggest religion right now are the E'atos, they won the last big war. The problems between the religions haven’t been solved and they still think their own religion is the best, so there could and there probably will be a new war.
The Leader of the E'atos is a woman at the age of 65 and her name is Victoria. I heard that she looks like an angels and that she even has wings but I don’t believe that a human can have wings. People call her the maiden of purity because she has never been touched by a man before.

-Magic
The last country is the country of the mages. The mages have a lot of knowledge. They got that knowledge because they want to know all about this world and they want to share it with other people. The power of the mages is magic. There magic is diverse, I have seen them shoot lighting and bring stone to life. Their magic is created by using their connection with nature and the universe to magnify their own energy.
The mage country is an old country. Their history is one of the easiest to trace back, that’s because the mages have been writing books since the first mage. Because of those books they have a lot of knowledge and because of that their schools and hospitals are top notch. All these books can be found in the Arcane Library. The Arcane Library can be found in the capital of the mages, it’s the biggest building there. In the Arcane Library there are even books that lets you learn magic, and people use those books to improve their skills.
The leader of the mages is always the oldest person in the land, that’s because they think wisdom is the biggest aspect a leader should have. They have a saying and it goes :’’a choice without wisdom is a choice based on luck’’. The leader right now is a 116 year old male. Even though he is 116 you shouldn’t think he is a pushover, I have seen him use magic and it’s an unbelievable sight.
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24th October 2011 18:46 #116
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Okay we are on a roll again. Yay!!!
それは私が述べていることである!! (That is what I am talking about!)
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25th October 2011 12:19 #117
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Cool so we set in the basic structure of each country. I get it.
You know all of the countries? We discussed them awhile back so I think there is pretty much a list there with all the countries we decided we were going to have
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25th October 2011 13:36 #118
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The ideas from last time, keep those ideas and don't lose them!!!!
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26th October 2011 14:02 #119
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@ MrAcid how are you going with those stories? (sorry im just getting lazy now. not bothered to think at this hour)
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26th October 2011 17:34 #120
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just one more to go

How do you like the four i already posted?
Last edited: 26th October 2011 21:29 by MrAcid

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